So we're now in June, in case you didn't see the horde of murder hornets swarming about... and it has been a whirlwind few months for this author.
We've moved!
The wife and I bought a house at the end of March, and that was after losing one house in early February. Things happen for a reason, and a week after losing that house, we found the one I'm typing to you in. We did quite a bit of work over the first month-plus of being here -- we've been here a little over two months now -- and I was really raring to write as May elapsed, but....
My wife had a stroke
Without going into too many details, my bride woke me up having a seizure at 2 a.m. a few weeks ago, and thanks to COVID, I was unable to see her for two weeks, until she was discharged from the rehab hospital. She had a brain bleed as part of a rare stroke; so has no mobility issues, just word recall problems from time to time. I had planned on stopping all writing, from my regular job to writing erotica and other mainstream fiction projects, but that has eased up as I've seen her make wonderful strides in her recovery. We've also had so much in the way of kindness bestowed upon us, from old friends of mine DoorDashing me the day after -- I may have had my first cry of the whole thing then, mainly from the amount of food -- to my wife's colleagues taking care of two evening meals for us when she got home. Of course, so many of my horny minions checked in on me and my mental health, which I greatly appreciated.
I have started a new story
I have a couple of yummy updates to give, too: I've started another re-write, much in the way WATCHING HER TURN BI was, but instead of completely re-imaging the story, I'm only fixing things up. Removing the head-hopping, the passive voice, showing more instead of just telling... the story is fire now, and thoroughly panty-melting. I'm about 15,500 words into the story or thereabouts, and will probably finish in a week or so, depending on how things go (the wife can't drive right now, so I'm bringing her everywhere). I don't expect this story to be published until late July, but crazier things have happened. If you thought WATCHING was hot, you ain't seen nothing yet; I've been told it's Classic Shawna, which you know means soaking.
I also have published a couple of other books recently:
A DISCREET THREESOME (Kindle US/Kindle UK/Smashwords)
A hot little tale of a husband who wants his wife to indulge of another man, and the wife who turns the tables on him and wants to see him indulge in bisexual activities. Definitely not as long as WATCHING, but certainly as hot as my best seller.
SPOUSAL CONFESSIONS (Kindle US/Kindle UK/Smashwords)
Just released a month ago, SPOUSAL CONFESSIONS was a reader request as a love letter to the reader's wife. I added some fantasy elements to it, and it's a real hum-dinger of a story. The wife has been cheating on the husband with her boss... another woman. It just so happens the husband has a confession to make, too: he has known sex between himself and another male, and it turns her on to the point where she schedules a double date. What happens? You'll have to read, and yes, it's pretty scorching.
I know I haven't updated the website with these delicious books -- and seeing as I have another coming out soon, I really have to get on that -- but I will do that soon. One day at a time.
Of course, WATCHING HER TURN BI is still my No. 1 seller! You can get it for Kindle (US/UK) and Smashwords.
Owing reads
I know I owe a bunch of reads to fellow authors who have sent me snippets or even full MS's for feedback... I'm hoping to get to that this weekend. Again, my time is not my own in many respects, and I do have to write in order to put food on the table. Things have happened, so I'm hoping to get to that soon.
Hot Tub Interviews
Have you missed me getting wet -- hehe!! -- with a lovely lady erotica author? Well, I have a few lined up for the summer, so stay tuned to this space. I just need to do some reading, think up my questions, and get to interviewing them in a yummy bikini... or maybe even topless? I think we might do it topless.
Hope everyone is staying cool... and staying horny! Kisses and long, lovable sucks!
Shawna
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Friday, June 5, 2020
Saturday, January 4, 2020
What the readers are saying about WATCHING HER TURN BI
It's been a touch over three weeks since I released my debut erotica novel, WATCHING HER TURN BI, and I'm overwhelmed by the response that the book has received in so little time. Over the first two and a half weeks that it had been available, I sold 51 copies. For me, that's a tremendous launch. And when I compare those 51 to the mainstream titles I sold in 2019, that short period ended up representing a smidge over 20 percent of my book sales for the entire year.
Read that sentence again.
And since the calendar flipped from 2019 to 2020, the sales have continued to come in.
I still think they could be better, though; I'm a natural pessimist, and even though I've sold X, I always think I can do better.
How to go about that? Without a large influx of advertising dollars, I have to do the next best thing -- and that's tell you what the readers, actual readers, are saying about my book. These are all paid purchases; no one received a free book in exchange for a review.
First, from Amazon:
Five stars on Amazon.co.uk: "This author definitely has a way with words, if your looking for a steamy read I can't recommend this book enough! Grab a glass of wine and make a night of it with Jenni and her story of self discovery."
Four stars on Amazon.com: "I really enjoyed this, definitely the threesome and foursome. The incident with the football player was really hot but I was expecting there to be more men in this based off of the title. While the MC is definitely Bi this story is more girl/girl action. Really hot girl/girl action. Would have given it five stars if it was closer to a 50/50 split."
Five stars on Amazon.com: "I read this to my hubby and it’s taken a while to get the whole book read, but it’s been fun! 😊 It’s a super hot read, extremely erotic! Shawna has hit all the points I like in these types of books! Definitely download worthy!"
Five stars on Amazon.com: "This is a great read. Good characters, sizzling story and some unexpected twists. One of the best!"
Curiosity piqued yet? No? OK, how about these on Goodreads:
Five stars: "This book was a hot, steamy read. I was squirming in my chair the whole time. I loved this book because the characters were well developed, the story was believable, the writing was evocative and beautiful, and the story took twists and turns I didn't expect. I highly recommend this fast-paced, high-intensity, coming-of-age story. The images it left planted in my brain are ones I return to frequently!"
Five stars: "Erotica books are usually a terrible read and I know I’m not the only one who thinks so. So when I find a good one, I feel like I should share it. This is only the 3rd GOOD erotica author I’ve found in all my reading years. You won’t be disappointed!"
Five stars: "Pick up this book and throw your pants away. You won’t need them until you’re done. My only complaint is that I wanted more! Shawna Cummings hit this one out of the park."
And -- I sense a pattern here -- five stars: "Brilliant erotica story with exquisite writing. Shawna’s way with words will definitely have you wanting more and more. If you’re looking for a panty soaker, this is the book for you."
See what I'm seeing? Seven 5-star reviews, and a 4-star review. All solid reading recommendations from readers just like Y.O.U.
But what about some tweets, too? Yes, some from fellow authors (authors are readers, too):
You know my dear friend Aleson Alexander; she writes this tweet about WATCHING:
Ready to take the plunge into Jenni's story? You can buy it in digital or paperback at my website here.
And thanks for reading.
Read that sentence again.
And since the calendar flipped from 2019 to 2020, the sales have continued to come in.
I still think they could be better, though; I'm a natural pessimist, and even though I've sold X, I always think I can do better.
How to go about that? Without a large influx of advertising dollars, I have to do the next best thing -- and that's tell you what the readers, actual readers, are saying about my book. These are all paid purchases; no one received a free book in exchange for a review.
First, from Amazon:
Five stars on Amazon.co.uk: "This author definitely has a way with words, if your looking for a steamy read I can't recommend this book enough! Grab a glass of wine and make a night of it with Jenni and her story of self discovery."
Four stars on Amazon.com: "I really enjoyed this, definitely the threesome and foursome. The incident with the football player was really hot but I was expecting there to be more men in this based off of the title. While the MC is definitely Bi this story is more girl/girl action. Really hot girl/girl action. Would have given it five stars if it was closer to a 50/50 split."
Five stars on Amazon.com: "I read this to my hubby and it’s taken a while to get the whole book read, but it’s been fun! 😊 It’s a super hot read, extremely erotic! Shawna has hit all the points I like in these types of books! Definitely download worthy!"
Five stars on Amazon.com: "This is a great read. Good characters, sizzling story and some unexpected twists. One of the best!"
Curiosity piqued yet? No? OK, how about these on Goodreads:
Five stars: "This book was a hot, steamy read. I was squirming in my chair the whole time. I loved this book because the characters were well developed, the story was believable, the writing was evocative and beautiful, and the story took twists and turns I didn't expect. I highly recommend this fast-paced, high-intensity, coming-of-age story. The images it left planted in my brain are ones I return to frequently!"
Five stars: "Erotica books are usually a terrible read and I know I’m not the only one who thinks so. So when I find a good one, I feel like I should share it. This is only the 3rd GOOD erotica author I’ve found in all my reading years. You won’t be disappointed!"
Five stars: "Pick up this book and throw your pants away. You won’t need them until you’re done. My only complaint is that I wanted more! Shawna Cummings hit this one out of the park."
And -- I sense a pattern here -- five stars: "Brilliant erotica story with exquisite writing. Shawna’s way with words will definitely have you wanting more and more. If you’re looking for a panty soaker, this is the book for you."
See what I'm seeing? Seven 5-star reviews, and a 4-star review. All solid reading recommendations from readers just like Y.O.U.
But what about some tweets, too? Yes, some from fellow authors (authors are readers, too):
You know my dear friend Aleson Alexander; she writes this tweet about WATCHING:
It's quite the enjoyable read. I suggest putting down something absorbent first. Your mattress will thank you. ❤️— Aleson Alexander (@AlesonAlexander) January 4, 2020
I have a feeling I will. Just started and already enjoying it.— Drake Lewis (@drake_lewis7) January 3, 2020
I’ve been reading “Watching Her Turn Bi” to Mr. He’s been sporting an erection while my panties are soaked.— LoriD (@DarlingL0ri) December 25, 2019
That’s a sign of a good erotica author! You can find the link at @CummingsShawna...
Merry Christmas my horny friends! pic.twitter.com/92otALWXhb
And you know my dear friend Haven:I love waking up to DMs like this about WATCHING HER TURN BI: pic.twitter.com/4lD2EBIAxF— Shawna Cummings (@CummingsShawna) December 30, 2019
First chapter into @CummingsShawna’s new book and I’m already in need of a cold shower! pic.twitter.com/qkdEPq44Pz— Haven Carter (@Haven_Carter) December 23, 2019
Read the sample for "Watching Her Turn Bi" by @CummingsShawna and is it moist in here or is it just that my panties are soaked?— Sorcha Rowan - Erotic Raconteuse (@AuthorRowan) December 23, 2019
— Rachel Steele ✡ (@RachelsErotica) December 23, 2019
Such an AMAZING read 😩 I absolutely 110% reccomend that you stop what you're doing and read this, NOW. The detail and anticipation will drive you crazy.— Aaliyah 🍑 (@_justpeachy_xo) December 16, 2019
Ps. You might want to remove your panties beforehand, because you will be soaked.. you've been warned 😋 @CummingsShawna pic.twitter.com/DwT9Efdpfh
She's not lying. https://t.co/AuIIDPqoMk— Josie Edwards (@erotic_josie) December 21, 2019
Time to relax and finish reading @CummingsShawna new release "Watching her turn bi."— Riley.Cross (@Riley_Cross_) December 15, 2019
Is it hot in here or what!😘 pic.twitter.com/TjiIfU4uC5
Ready to take the plunge into Jenni's story? You can buy it in digital or paperback at my website here.
And thanks for reading.
Saturday, December 14, 2019
Introducing WATCHING HER TURN BI
Now available is my debut erotic novel, Watching Her Turn Bi. It is the story of Jenni Jensen, an 18-year-old girl who has a bit of a thing for her neighbor and best friend, Lindsay Pearson. As the story opens, Jenni tells the reader that she has had a crush on Lindsay for some time, and she has tried to be subtle when gauging her friend's feelings on bisexual activities.
But when Lindsay succumbs to those desires, she does not turn to Jenni.... and then we're off. The story is told from Jenni's point of view, and we see students intermingling with others. It is chock full of sex -- because what are teens thinking about? That's right.
So, how did Watching come about?
Honestly... I wrote its original tale in 2003, but it was only about 7,000 words and done in two parts. It was also told from the male point of view, and the characters of Jenni, Katie, Eva Tortorelli, et al. didn't exist. Lindsay and Christina, though, did.
When I decided to return to erotica two months ago, I knew I needed a strong story to kick if off, and I thought that re-writing the original tale, switching POV from male to female, and really expanding the story to make it full, would be the way to do it all.
I wrote Watching on a breakneck pace, some days writing as many as 3,000 words. I polished it up, gave it a couple of weeks, and then re-read it again.
In my humble opinion, it's a pretty solid first piece, if I do say so myself. And I'm planning to go back and expanding the tale with a couple more books, going back and telling the tale of how Eva was ensnared, and then moving forward with all of the girls.
It is currently available for the introductory price of $2.99 on Amazon Kindle and on Smashwords for everyone else!
US Kindle
UK Kindle
Smashwords
UPDATE: The paperback is out, too!
US Amazon -- $9.95
UK Amazon -- 7.47 British pounds
But when Lindsay succumbs to those desires, she does not turn to Jenni.... and then we're off. The story is told from Jenni's point of view, and we see students intermingling with others. It is chock full of sex -- because what are teens thinking about? That's right.
So, how did Watching come about?
Honestly... I wrote its original tale in 2003, but it was only about 7,000 words and done in two parts. It was also told from the male point of view, and the characters of Jenni, Katie, Eva Tortorelli, et al. didn't exist. Lindsay and Christina, though, did.
When I decided to return to erotica two months ago, I knew I needed a strong story to kick if off, and I thought that re-writing the original tale, switching POV from male to female, and really expanding the story to make it full, would be the way to do it all.
I wrote Watching on a breakneck pace, some days writing as many as 3,000 words. I polished it up, gave it a couple of weeks, and then re-read it again.
In my humble opinion, it's a pretty solid first piece, if I do say so myself. And I'm planning to go back and expanding the tale with a couple more books, going back and telling the tale of how Eva was ensnared, and then moving forward with all of the girls.
It is currently available for the introductory price of $2.99 on Amazon Kindle and on Smashwords for everyone else!
US Kindle
UK Kindle
Smashwords
UPDATE: The paperback is out, too!
US Amazon -- $9.95
UK Amazon -- 7.47 British pounds
Wednesday, November 27, 2019
Getting excited as I get closer to publication: the content is coming!
The title says it all, doesn't it?
Of course, anyone would be happy and excited when they are within two, three weeks of publishing their first erotic stories (yes, that's stories, plural). The last month-plus of resurrecting an old plot line that I had forgotten about, plus revising an old story that was nearly 7,000 words into a 45,000-word short novel, and a new story that I had written earlier this year, has been a little bit of a whirlwind. Of course, when you throw paid work into the mix, and being a house hottie like I am, that can turn the past month-plus into a blur.
And it definitely has.
Let me catch you up and tell you what I have coming down the pipeline in December, seeing as we're practically on the verge of the final month of 2019:
Watching Her Turn Bi
(Shawna note: Will contain female on female love, person of power, plus allusions to male on male)
This story was an old story that I had written about 16, 17 years ago, but had written it from a different point of view. I decided to completely re-write the story, change the POV, and I was certainly in a zone while writing this piece. I'm going to market it as a New Adult Coming of Age tale of bisexual exploration, as Jenni Jensen, a vivacious 18-year-old, has an unrequited crush on her neighbor and best friend, Lindsay Pearson. It takes the reader through Jenni's POV, where she going through her feelings for Lindsay, but not only that, takes her down a path she hadn't thought possible -- except in her deepest, darkest fantasies.
This is a story that I've been feeding my horny minions in private over the course of writing the book, and the response -- the arousal, the soaked panties -- has been tremendous. I'm banking on this book to get into the Amazon Top 1,000 in the erotica category, and stay there for an incredibly long time.
In addition, I'm planning a prequel for this story, so I'm hoping a lot of people buy it, read it, and let me know just how much I soaked them so writing the second book will be well worth it.
A Discreet Threesome
(Shawna note: Will contain hotwife/interracial/bi husband)
This is a new story that I came up with back in February, and I had intended it to be longer than it is. Far longer, in fact. It was, in theory, a story that would have harkened to the erotic thrillers of the early 1990s that ran occasionally on Cinemax Late Night, but I don't think I could have executed that well enough... although, now that I'm thinking about it, I probably could.
This tale tells of Tim and Lisa, a lovely married couple that have been spicing things up in the bedroom. The two of them fantasize about adding a black man into the bedroom, and Lisa ups the ante: she would love to see Tim pleasing the bull, too.
I absolutely lust hotwife stories, and I also drip for bisexual men locked in a sexual embrace -- especially when a wife or girlfriend is involved or watching. I just do; boy-boy love is so fucking hot! I know that some won't like the bi portion of the story -- I have another story like this percolating, but with a completely different angle -- but I would hope a lot of people are open-minded enough to at least try the story.
Untitled first Sarah Trumbull: Slut Detective serial
(Shawna note: Will contain female on female, female on male... and other, can't spoil that)
Lara Longstaff, a dear erotic author friend, has been pushing me to write serials for years, and I decided to take this piece, which I had started six years ago (I had posted it here on my blog), and turn it into a serialized story. I know that a lot of authors swear by the serial -- Lara being one, Lexie Renard another -- and I'm hoping that Sarah Trumbull can be a solid serial coming out periodically.
In the first book, Sarah is diddling away when in walks Vivienne Abernathy, a gorgeous, statuesque blonde. Her conundrum: She suspects her husband is cheating on her, and hires Sarah to find out the truth ... but not before dining on the slut detective's yummy little pussy.
And as you can see, there's an "other" in the story. I can't spoil that, you'll have to read it to see what I mean.
So there you have it. The publishing schedule hasn't been determined yet, but I'm hoping you will buy, download, and diddle. That's why I write the stories I write!
At the moment, I don't have covers settled, but we'll see how that comes about in the next couple of weeks. Of course, they will be on my blog when I do get them all.
Thanks for reading, and may your panties be wet on this extended weekend!
Of course, anyone would be happy and excited when they are within two, three weeks of publishing their first erotic stories (yes, that's stories, plural). The last month-plus of resurrecting an old plot line that I had forgotten about, plus revising an old story that was nearly 7,000 words into a 45,000-word short novel, and a new story that I had written earlier this year, has been a little bit of a whirlwind. Of course, when you throw paid work into the mix, and being a house hottie like I am, that can turn the past month-plus into a blur.
And it definitely has.
Let me catch you up and tell you what I have coming down the pipeline in December, seeing as we're practically on the verge of the final month of 2019:
Watching Her Turn Bi
(Shawna note: Will contain female on female love, person of power, plus allusions to male on male)
This story was an old story that I had written about 16, 17 years ago, but had written it from a different point of view. I decided to completely re-write the story, change the POV, and I was certainly in a zone while writing this piece. I'm going to market it as a New Adult Coming of Age tale of bisexual exploration, as Jenni Jensen, a vivacious 18-year-old, has an unrequited crush on her neighbor and best friend, Lindsay Pearson. It takes the reader through Jenni's POV, where she going through her feelings for Lindsay, but not only that, takes her down a path she hadn't thought possible -- except in her deepest, darkest fantasies.
This is a story that I've been feeding my horny minions in private over the course of writing the book, and the response -- the arousal, the soaked panties -- has been tremendous. I'm banking on this book to get into the Amazon Top 1,000 in the erotica category, and stay there for an incredibly long time.
In addition, I'm planning a prequel for this story, so I'm hoping a lot of people buy it, read it, and let me know just how much I soaked them so writing the second book will be well worth it.
A Discreet Threesome
(Shawna note: Will contain hotwife/interracial/bi husband)
This is a new story that I came up with back in February, and I had intended it to be longer than it is. Far longer, in fact. It was, in theory, a story that would have harkened to the erotic thrillers of the early 1990s that ran occasionally on Cinemax Late Night, but I don't think I could have executed that well enough... although, now that I'm thinking about it, I probably could.
This tale tells of Tim and Lisa, a lovely married couple that have been spicing things up in the bedroom. The two of them fantasize about adding a black man into the bedroom, and Lisa ups the ante: she would love to see Tim pleasing the bull, too.
I absolutely lust hotwife stories, and I also drip for bisexual men locked in a sexual embrace -- especially when a wife or girlfriend is involved or watching. I just do; boy-boy love is so fucking hot! I know that some won't like the bi portion of the story -- I have another story like this percolating, but with a completely different angle -- but I would hope a lot of people are open-minded enough to at least try the story.
Untitled first Sarah Trumbull: Slut Detective serial
(Shawna note: Will contain female on female, female on male... and other, can't spoil that)
Lara Longstaff, a dear erotic author friend, has been pushing me to write serials for years, and I decided to take this piece, which I had started six years ago (I had posted it here on my blog), and turn it into a serialized story. I know that a lot of authors swear by the serial -- Lara being one, Lexie Renard another -- and I'm hoping that Sarah Trumbull can be a solid serial coming out periodically.
In the first book, Sarah is diddling away when in walks Vivienne Abernathy, a gorgeous, statuesque blonde. Her conundrum: She suspects her husband is cheating on her, and hires Sarah to find out the truth ... but not before dining on the slut detective's yummy little pussy.
And as you can see, there's an "other" in the story. I can't spoil that, you'll have to read it to see what I mean.
So there you have it. The publishing schedule hasn't been determined yet, but I'm hoping you will buy, download, and diddle. That's why I write the stories I write!
At the moment, I don't have covers settled, but we'll see how that comes about in the next couple of weeks. Of course, they will be on my blog when I do get them all.
Thanks for reading, and may your panties be wet on this extended weekend!
Monday, October 28, 2019
Sneaky Panty Peek: A scene in Watching Her Turn Bi
All characters aged 18 or over. Copyright 2019 Shawna Cummings.
What I've posted below is from my current WIP, Watching Her Turn Bi. It is a New Adult/Coming of Age lesbian tale, set in Rhode Island. I hope you like what you see.
I gasped when I saw the fiery digits read 10:42 p.m.
What I've posted below is from my current WIP, Watching Her Turn Bi. It is a New Adult/Coming of Age lesbian tale, set in Rhode Island. I hope you like what you see.
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I checked my phone before I stripped out of my school uniform; there had been no texts from Lindsay, no texts from any of my friends.
Good. I didn’t want to deal with anyone.
I unbuttoned my blouse and set it in my hamper, then reached back and unhooked my bra, shrugging it off my shoulders and setting my breasts free from their lengthy imprisonment. I gently rubbed the undersides of them, if only to ease the slight dig of the underwire; the cool air licking at my nipples hardened them, and I wished there was a willing mouth to do it.
Once I had my kilt off and flung aside, leaving me in my full-backed navy blue bikini briefs, I grabbed a thin t-shirt, one Lindsay had bought me when she had gone to New York City with her family a year ago, and pulled it over my head. I debated on sweatpants, but I figured that I would take a light nap and try to forget what had happened. It had to be a dream. It just had to be.
I turned out my light, shut my bedroom door, then slipped between the covers. My mother had already changed the sheets from the summertime cotton to the fall flannels, and I loved the feel of them in this weather. It felt as if I were enveloped in love, the fabric clothing my skin. I swung my legs back and forth, silently wishing I had someone here to share these feelings of comfort with me.
I set my phone on my bedside table. Lindsay had her own ring tone and text tone; if it went off, I would know who it was at once. I wanted to give her space, to let her think, but a small part of me wanted her to come back over, or text me to let her know that she was okay.
Sleep overtook me as soon as my eyes closed, my breathing slowing. Rest came, and I felt ready to forget my troubles for the time being…
I stood in a field of flowers, the various colors a kaleidoscope to my eyes. The sun was warm, unlike the tepidness in my reality. I felt the heat surrounding me, and I felt as if I would never be happier just from the warmth’s kiss on my skin.
I noticed I was barefoot, but that I wore what appeared to me as a sheer sundress, one that was weightless on my slender frame. I felt my nipples against the material and felt watery silk, and I didn’t want them to soften any time soon. I saw my cleavage and wanted to gasp; even though I didn’t have a bra on, the dress supported me on its own. Tiny pearls lined the bodice.
Walking down a decline, the aroma of honeysuckle and rosemary drifted on the breeze, and outside of being happy, my soul felt content. I breathed in every scent and it sated my hunger. The breezes kicked up and the fabric rustled against my bare legs. I felt it swirl between my legs, licking the length of me through the tiny silk panties I wore. I shivered with slight arousal.
I wondered, if only briefly, where I was. I didn’t recognize the place, but I wasn’t afraid of being so far from home. Far from it; I felt comfortable here, as if I lived the first 18 years old my life to come to this place for eternity. It was a soft place, a gentle place, a place where life and love was revered. The lush green grass intermingled with the flowers almost made it look like a quilt, the fabrics full of life — it was life itself, the beating heart of the world.
The path I walked along was semi-worn from countless feet, but I didn’t see anyone else lingering. I kept walking until I saw a pond, its waters sparkling in the sunshine, as if millions upon millions of tiny diamonds covered the breadth of it.
When I reached it, I couldn’t help myself. I dropped into a crouch and let my fingers graze the water’s surface. It felt cool and clean, and inviting.
I nodded and stood, reached up to my shoulders and let the silken clothes tumble from me, landing in a pool at the waters edge. I stood there naked save the tiny panties, but I didn’t hook my thumbs into them and let the material cascade down my legs. Something told me to keep them on.
Without hesitation, I walked into the pond like a moth drawn to light. The water slipped up my body and welcomed me, wrapping me and touching me in various ways as I flung my arms out. I wanted to float there, for the water was shallow. My panties had dampened, but I didn’t care. I was in love with this place, with the water, with everything. I had joy filling my heart as I swam.
“Jenni,” a soft voice called. “Come, you’re going to love it here.”
I turned and gasped to myself, and there stood Lindsay, wearing the same type of sundress that I had on. I saw through to her skin; her nipples tiny pebbles against her wonderful breasts, making indentations on the fabric. She, too, wore the tiny panties, and I felt aroused at seeing her in such a way.
But will she feel the same way about me as soon as I walk out of the pond, water droplets clinging to my breasts, to my panties, fighting amongst each other for the right to remain?
I stood and walked toward her, trying to do so with as much seduction as my 18-year-old body knew. I felt the water drip away like I thought it would, and I pulled my wet hair back to show her as much neck as possible. I tried to sashay my hips, but the water made no sound as I strode away from its center.
I finally stood in front of Lindsay, my Lindsay. She looked incredibly mesmerizing, her red hair seemingly on fire in the sunshine. It dazzled; I had never seen it that pale!
“I know what you want,” Lindsay in front of me said.
“Yes?”
Much like I had, Lindsay reached up and undressed herself, letting her sundress drop, revealing herself to me. Her breasts was perfect, her nipples reaching out to me. She dragged her fingertips along the inner curves of her breasts as she stepped out of the sundress; and I saw she was equally barefoot.
Her tiny panties, unlike mine, were slightly damp. I caught a whiff of her arousal; it was intoxicating.
“You want me,” she continued. “You want me all for yourself.”
My bottom lip trembled.
“Yes,” I whispered. “I do.”
Her smile sprang away and radiated heat through me. Sweat licked my brow.
“Good. Because I want you, too.”
She leaned in and dropped her lips onto mine. I gasped into her mouth, surprised as I was by her sudden boldness; her tongue soon followed, and I sparred with it with gusto, savoring her taste. She reached down and pulled me closer to her by my ass; I shivered as soon as I realized her hands cupped the very bottom of my buns. My breasts collided with hers, and I did my level best to touch hers, to get our nipples aligned in such a way as to rub against one another.
After a minute, Lindsay pulled away and gestured toward her left breast.
“Lick,” she ordered.
I couldn’t stop myself. I launched myself at her, my mouth opening as I drew closer; I clamped my lips around her nipple, swinging my tongue back and forth as she arched her back, as if to feed more of her tasty breast into my mouth. Her nipple grew harder in my mouth, if that was possible.
“Now the other one, that’s my girl.”
I obeyed. It was impossible not to. I moved effortlessly. I bent over some more, trying to account for her movements; she moved to her knees, and I followed, not taking my mouth away from her breast. If I let go, bad things would occur, and I didn’t want to think of those things right now. I knew she would take care of my needs and desires while I had my mouth planted on her, my tongue dancing on her nipples.
I heard myself salivating on her, so tasty she was that I barely registered my wet panties coming down my legs. I didn’t care. Lindsay wanted me naked, and so naked I should be.
“Can you lick my pussy, Jenni?” Lindsay leaned back and slipped the gusset of her little panties to the side, revealing the treasure I wanted to savor. I stared at her as she brought a finger toward her clit and circled it. “Lick her and don’t stop until I tell you, baby.”
I nodded and leaned in toward her. I took that first tentative lick of my desire’s pussy, and I heard her mew as her back arched again. That drove me, and I took a deeper, longer lick, from the bottom of her toward the top. Even in my dreams, I had never licked a prettier, tastier cleft.
“Lick me, eat me,” she begged.
I delivered. I spread her lips and saw that pink interior, and I dove in tongue first just as I felt my legs being separated, my hips and midsection being raised. I didn’t dare look back, so intent I was on pleasuring my love that I could have cared less what was happening.
Then I felt it, and it made me stiffen, made me pull my mouth away from Lindsay’s wet pussy. An object, a large object, threatened to spear me in my own tender, inflamed pussy. And if Lindsay was in front of me —
“Baby, let her fuck you,” Lindsay breathed. “It would turn me on so much. Concentrate on licking me instead.”
I looked back over my shoulder, and there was Christina, a wicked gleam in her eye, her breasts rounded and supple — and a thick strap-on cock attached to her groin. And the tip of it — gosh, if that was the tip — was between my nether lips, ready to make me her bitch.
For half a heartbeat, I wanted it. I don’t know why, but I did. I wanted her to impale me on that thing. I wanted her to fuck me for all I was worth, and then some. I wanted her to ravage my body.
As long as she didn’t take my mouth off Lindsay’s pussy, I would kneel there and accept it.
“Slowly, Christina,” Lindsay said. “She’s never had anything that big in her tight little pussy. Go slow, let her savor it and my tastiness.”
I looked up at Lindsay and pleaded with my eyes.
“It’ll be okay,” she said, her tone full of love, compassion, and tenderness. “Lick me, honey. I want you to lick me.”
I nodded slowly as Christina pushed the fake cock into me. I groaned as the pleasure tore through me, but I returned my mouth to Lindsay’s sweetness. I slid my tongue back and forth, from east to east and back again, right on her clit. I felt Her fingers start to lace through my hair as Christna withdrew the dick halfway before she slammed it back into me.
I couldn’t help but moan into Lindsay, a gasp that made Lindsay shake, the reverberations sliced through her.
Christina started sawing in and out of me, and I couldn’t help but arch my back. I wanted to reach down between my legs and touch my pussy, to feel the latex cock go in and out, but I had duties to attend to. I needed to lick Lindsay to orgasm. I had to. I had to.
But as the fucking increased, I had to pull away from Lindsay and shove my pussy and ass back toward Christina and the strap-on. The sensations were just too much. I closed my eyes tight as Christina drilled me, and the next time I stuck my tongue out in the general direction of Lindsay’s pussy, all I hit was air.
I wanted to scream, scream at my frustrations of losing the sweetest-tasting pussy this side of Providence, but all I heard was what I thought was Christina cackling.
“You’re never going to lick her pussy,” she taunted. She sounded like she was bent over me, her breath hot on my ear. She licked it, and I couldn’t help but issue a guttural moan. She pummeled me, and I felt the strap-on bottom out on me. “All you’re going to do is be my little bitch, take my strappy in your little cunt. Fuck you while she watches and laughs at you for being my little submissive. Oh yes, this pussy is tight; maybe you should have taken some more of those medium and small dicks in here, you would be loosened you wouldn’t be clinging to it like you are.”
I stiffened and moaned.
“Oh, fuck. Fuck me. Fuck me, please, Christina.”
“That’s exactly what I’m going to do,” she said through clenched teeth. “Going to fuck you, and fuck you hard, until you’re cumming all over it, then feed your pussy cum to you.”
“Oh, god,” I said, and this time, I heard myself say it, a touch more audible than before. I snapped my eyes open, but didn’t jerk out of bed. I moaned slightly — and that’s when I realized I had my hand inside my panties, my pussy drenched. I wiggled my fingers, and all I felt was the inside of me. I fingered myself a few more times, feeling the satiny softness of my pussy; I heard myself squishing.
“Fuck,” I whispered. “That feels so good.” I slipped my fingers out and brought them to my clit, then fully withdrew them and brought them to my mouth. I plunged them into my mouth. I loved tasting myself, and I had been worked up quite a bit to produce the amount of juice saturating my fingers.
Once they were clean, I looked to the clock.
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